One thought jumping to another, is how I read it. Nice build up. Andrew
On 13 March 2014 02:02, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Ta
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> It started out as being a sequence of interjections. I even had that with
> the title until I decided that it made no sense. It wasn't that it wasn't
> bullet points, just that wasn't where I was coming from.
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> Obviously though it was read like that. Reflecting on that, I decided that
> it was ok if it were read as bullet points. It's a while back now, but
> that's I remember it. (I'm going through my unpublished and uncollected
> poems, no matter how long it takes me, and taking a new path through them
> to pick up the ones that my own filing "methodology" has missed - hence the
> jump from one thing to another of my recent postings)
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> On 12 March 2014 14:54, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> > Sort of like Bullet Points, Lawrence, & works that way for me...
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> > Doug
> > On Mar 12, 2014, at 6:45 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
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> > > - how many nights I've listened to her wailing
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> > > - houses crammed by profuse vocabularies
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> > > - voices and tiredness inform each other
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> > > - I have heard them call before, and before that
> > >
> > > - nothing new is ever said
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> > >
> > > - insubstantiality conversing
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> > > - spherical, tumbling, vacuous
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> > > - bird lands on beach, pecks grain of sand
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> > > - wired nations, frogs mating
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> > > - puffballs on a wind
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> > > - absorbed in the one and lonely
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> > Douglas Barbour
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> > http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
> > http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
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> > Latest books:
> > Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
> > http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
> > Recording Dates
> > (Rubicon Press)
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> > Swept snow, Li Po,
> > by dawn's 40-watt moon
> > to the road that hies to office
> > away from home.
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> > Lorine Niedecker
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Andrew
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