Ah, I'll think on all that I(it is 'just' a quick snap); I added the 'quite' just as I typed it, & youre right about that...
Doug
On Feb 26, 2014, at 9:12 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> what about putting stanza 2 first
> and dropping the "quite"
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> On 26 February 2014 16:02, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> That could be
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>> if I cared enough
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>> Swept snow, Li Po,
>> by dawn's 40-watt moon
>> to the road that hies to office
>> away from home.
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>> Lorine Niedecker
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Douglas Barbour
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Latest books:
Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
Recording Dates
(Rubicon Press)
Swept snow, Li Po,
by dawn’s 40-watt moon
to the road that hies to office
away from home.
Lorine Niedecker
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