At minus 30 windchill here, it' all white to me, Bill, & Patrick (even in performance, I agree with Bill).
Doug
On Feb 5, 2014, at 3:47 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Still pause in performance at 'and' but 'also that' adds nothing does it, Pat? Your call.
>
> Can only dimly remember wet. More 40s coming, hot northerlies and no rain for at least next 8 days. Vacating the state tomorrow. Heading for Tassie, chasing a trickle.
>
> Bill
>
>> On 5 Feb 2014, at 9:32 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> Cheers bill thanks for comment I was thinking of this as a performance piece
>> and with a pause at 'and' also that worked well maybe different as a page
>> piece
>> Cold here wet very wet wet
>> P
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
>> Behalf Of Bill Wootton
>> Sent: 05 February 2014 10:15
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: Re: pat snap 612 -)*( -)*( -)*(-Wednesday, 05 February 2014
>>
>> Ah, I recognise that life, Pat. You could skip 'also that' for more punch.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Bill
>>
>>>> On 5 Feb 2014, at 8:26 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> HIS LIFE
>>>
>>> his life
>>> was
>>> rather like
>>> a crossword
>>> where all
>>> the clues had
>>> been omitted
>>> and
>>> also that
>>> all the squares
>>> were black
>>> all black
>>>
>>> pmcmanus
>>> r455
>>> haha not autobiographical!!
>>> Wednesday, 05 February 2014
>>
>
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