The stanza breaks are here, L, & it doesnt necessarily need the centredness....
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On Jan 22, 2014, at 6:27 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Oh bottom. I'll send from gmail and then give up
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> in case it doesnt work, the whole thing is centred with 1st, 4th and
> 7thlines separated by line breaks
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> a child glimmers through fluorescent light
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> in broiderie anglaise
> sucking her thumb
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> bumped over uneven ground
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> by a beautiful down
> in the mouth mother
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> in a cap marked "Carnation"
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> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> Date: 22 January 2014 13:15
> Subject: snap- better layout which I couldntfind earlier
> To: [log in to unmask]
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> a child glimmers in fluorescent light
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> in broiderie anglaise
>
> sucking her thumb
>
> bumped over uneven ground
>
> by a beautiful down
>
> in the mouth mother
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> in a cap marked "Carnation"
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