First line of yr poem, P.
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On Jan 15, 2014, at 11:07 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Thanks Douglas cheer P when -he dear ??
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Douglas Barbour
> Sent: 15 January 2014 17:44
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: pat snaps 610 _->^<-_
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> 'questioning' can stay or go, depending, i guess.
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> But 'when he dear' ?
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> Always get a return ticket, though...
>
> Doug
> On Jan 15, 2014, at 4:13 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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>> Hi Bill hot out your way!!
>> cheers thanks for comment much appreciated rather liked the
>> questioning pause pointing out as part of their confusion -will reread!!
>> Once again some else has got my snap but it has not arrived here to
>> the great sadness of an elderly person
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
>> On Behalf Of Bill Wootton
>> Sent: 15 January 2014 11:04
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: Re: pat snaps 610 _->^<-_
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>> Pat you could leave out the word/line 'questioning' and do no damage
>> to the poem. Not sure how much damage granddad suffered.
>>
>> Bill
>>
>>> On 15 Jan 2014, at 9:27 pm, Patrick McManus
>> <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
>>> TRIP
>>>
>>> when he dear
>>> old granddad
>>> booked a trip
>>> to Switzerland
>>> to Dignitas
>>> nobody
>>> in the family
>>> felt up to
>>> questioning
>>> pointing out
>>> that he had
>>> bought a
>>> return ticket
>>>
>>>
>>> pmcmanus
>>> r433
>>> Wednesday, 15 January 2014
>>>
>>
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Swept snow, Li Po,
by dawn’s 40-watt moon
to the road that hies to office
away from home.
Lorine Niedecker
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