Yeah, Ive seen that happen, & not sure how.
Like the rhythmning of the thing when I take those lost breaks into account...
Doug
On Jan 29, 2014, at 6:12 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> bravely?
> not really
>
> It looks as though the system chewed the layout
> i had spaces and stuff
> oh well
>
>
> L
>
>
> On 29 January 2014 13:08, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
>
>> L cheers bravely atop a ferry boat
>> P
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
>> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
>> Sent: 29 January 2014 10:49
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: snap
>>
>> atop a ferry boat, eyes closing,each wave... each sound... each
>> moment...I am overwhelmed
>> lean, my head against metal,discerning rhythm overridingundertones of
>> boat's engine; and the sea
>> cannot be turned offby moving backand sitting up
>> eyes open
>> a sharp andthen harsh glintabove the mainland north of Sounionbecomes
>> a helicopter rising
>> coming at us
>> keeps going towards Corinth
>>
>
Douglas Barbour
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