E. Moli
On 18 December 2013 15:53, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
> E moil?
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 18 December 2013 15:13
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: walking the cliffs at Ogo Dour
>
> different kind of moil
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> L
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> On 18 December 2013 15:01, Patrick McManus
> <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
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> > Me dear dad-moiling
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> > On Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> > Sent: 18 December 2013 13:10
> > To: [log in to unmask]
> > Subject: Re: walking the cliffs at Ogo Dour
> >
> > did not sit comfortably with what, dear boy?
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On 18 December 2013 12:56, Patrick McManus
> > <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
> >
> > > L thanks lively for me -moiled did not seem to sit comfortably (for
> > > me!!)??
> > > P
> > >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics
> > > [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> > > Sent: 18 December 2013 11:02
> > > To: [log in to unmask]
> > > Subject: walking the cliffs at Ogo Dour
> > >
> > > white out at some distance
> > >
> > > grey-green nearer
> > >
> > > the stubble-below cliffs
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > a cliff top pool
> > >
> > > a temporary thing of rain
> > >
> > > wonderfully blustered
> > >
> > > we look in
> > >
> > > leaning away from the edge
> > >
> > > being pushed to
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > seeking life
> > >
> > > some dirt or something
> > >
> > > but there is none
> > >
> > > only the moiled clay soil
> > >
> > > at its base
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > a stonechat dashes
> > >
> > > from grasses out into sea sky
> > >
> > > returning sharply
> > >
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