YES SALLY POTTER
Yes it all relates
except when
she gets back you'll be out.
So looked up to you
and hear you protest my
leaving
living cell the source of wonder
your point of view.
Barry Alpert / Silver Spring MD US / 9-7-10>>12-11-13 (7:27AM)
While searching for details in my journals for an entirely different purpose, I stumbled upon a rough draft written while watching Sally Potter's feature film YES for the first time. Quickly realized that the draft required very little revision, so I decided to reward myself by taking a break from my onerous task and completing my acrostic half-sonnet.
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