Thanks for that, Jill. Appreciated L
On 5 September 2013 00:36, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> The 'non', en words in the first two stanzas then effs and aitches in the
> last
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> On 04/09/2013, at 5:50 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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> > The wrenched wildness drugged,
> >
> > he says; beyond orgasm,
> >
> > he replies to himself,
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> > not lying. Nothing clear.
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> >
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> > Frail, unsteady, he says,
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> > confused, embarrassed, beyond
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> > the pleasure of senses, not quite lost;
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> > the glee of non-sense.
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> > Yet battering etches her.
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> > Half-forgotten verbals filter
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> > from a hoped for edginess,
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> > then fade, expressed by tongues.
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