critical comments as usual are very welcome... more for BBQ (and now BBQ
has moved away from the earlier BBQ photo still lifes... )
(sailing away working title-- to be deleted)
Deep in mire of what is said that we know
like caught in barb wire and bed you have made
in noxious black friar bushes gone weed
rampant so no chemicals can control
It is this ruling control makes trouble
in a department store brought hack fashion
designer label price tags ought not be
anal appraisal and joy to this boy
and city lights with frozen ice white cold
notions drifting on desolate oceans
where rolled fog fails navigating to shore
sailors lost without rescue and no hope
and there is another line makes you home
when weather is fine and finish line crossed
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