I like it, Bill - everyday life as we know it.
Andrew
On 27 March 2013 09:12, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> You know you have
> hopped hemispheres
> when you type in
> 'Be...' on your server
> and what pops up,
> instead of the expected
> Bendigo Bank,
> is Beyonce,
> Ben Stiller
> and some sort
> of ice cream brand.
>
>
> On Sat, Mar 23rd, 2013 at 1:54 AM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> > Oh, okay, you want the pause, whereas I was thinking it read without any
> > (ie, sans comma).
>
> See what you mean, Doug but I'll go with announcing what it means to be
> underground. Sorry for slowness to
> reply to you and have lost Judy's comment. poetryetc postings tricky it
> seems out of Australia. Hope this works,
>
> Bill
> >
> > Doug
> > On 2013-03-21, at 7:24 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
> >
> > > Perhaps you are right, Doug. A semi colon may provide better the
> > anticipatory pause needed. But I have used
> > > one in the third line which would make another in the fourth look
> > clunky. Perhaps a full stop to close the third
> > > line.
> > > Pat, no smell and I seem to have led you astray. This is no subway.
> > Watsonia station is an above-ground train
> > > station that lies in what we call a 'cutting', so below surrounding
> > road/land level.
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Bill
> > >
> > > On Thu, Mar 21st, 2013 at 9:13 AM, Douglas Barbour
> > <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > >
> > >> I like the short drive of it all, but wonder if the first comma in the
> > >> last line is working as you wish it to...
> > >>
> > >> Doug
> > >> On 2013-03-20, at 10:35 AM, Patrick McManus
> > >> <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > >>
> > >>> Bill did it smell in the subway?? (or is it only over here??)
> > >>> P
> > >>>
> > >>> -----Original Message-----
> > >>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]
> ]
> > >> On
> > >>> Behalf Of Bill Wootton
> > >>> Sent: 20 March 2013 15:11
> > >>> To: [log in to unmask]
> > >>> Subject: Watsonia Station snap
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Ramping off-level down to Watsonia station via
> > >>> concrete returning zigzag lands you on asphalt.
> > >>> Join the jostle, ready for relay to more crowdplay;
> > >>> underneath you are, sub-clay, off-street, car-less.
> > >>>
> > >>> Bill Wootton
> > >>>
> > >>
> > >> Douglas Barbour
> > >> [log in to unmask]
> > >>
> > >> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
> > >> http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> > >>
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> > >> (Rubicon Press)
> > >>
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> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
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> > http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
> > http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> >
> > Latest books:
> > Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
> > http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
> > Recording Dates
> > (Rubicon Press)
> >
> > Reserved books. Reserved land. Reserved flight.
> > And still property is theft.
> >
> > Phyllis Webb
> >
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Andrew
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