Thank you very much indeed, Sheila
L
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Sent:Wed, 5 Dec 2012 10:33:48 -0700
Subject:Re: snap
Lawrence, I like the effects of the line breaks, and the depth of
what is
here. Lovely. Sheila
On Wed, Dec 5, 2012 at 4:10 AM, Lawrence Upton
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> Too late, tonight, to think dross from the not.
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> Too late to say your words are different
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> from mine. Yet our words are also my words
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> reflecting your words, and doubtless others'.
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> My eyes know less, yet I see more as death
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> moves closer, sand skipping, taking pictures.
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