well, Lawrence, I appreciate the liking from a recognised entity as much as from any other kind of entity. many thanks
today the garden (the new one) was more greyed than blued. spring gets a bit unpredictable here.
J
On 01/11/2012, at 11:25 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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> I liked this very much, Jill
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> (This is the third time I have said so; but the first time I have
> been signed on as an entity jiscmail recognises)
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> Thanks
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> L
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> On
> Behalf Of Jill Jones
> Sent: 31 October 2012 11:34
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> Subject: snap of changes
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> Shadings, awake, above
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> or part the edge
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> blue the garden
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> in the way of an eye
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> Change masses on
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> a mark colours
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> the edge
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> the wind's honest
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> Small things give form
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> light beaten, water white
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> each second an old
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> abundance=
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