I wonder if we need the first two lines (P in wrecking mood:-))
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i like where this turns, on the trees open
and, of course, here it is the season of green, first fruiting, blossom
carpeting ground
On 18/10/2012, at 1:54 AM, sharon brogan wrote:
> *It's the season of retreat,
> the season of death.
> Leaves on the lily turn
> yellow, then brown, then
> fall. But this death is not
> close, not dark. Trees open
> to sky, blue falls down
> through bare branches.
> I step outside into a whirl-
> wind of gold leaves.*
>
>
> --
> sharon brogan
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