Well I am wondering if
AAH!
his
belle
told!
Is actually a bit long three words and three lines and a title!
Perhaps no title and two lines would be sharper??
belle
told!
P in editing mode tolling
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Douglas Barbour
Sent: 17 October 2012 18:04
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Subject: Re: pat snaps **********_______**********Wednesday, 17 October 2012
Geez, that's me, too, that juvenile. And love the response, Max.
Doug
On 2012-10-17, at 3:00 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Thanks Max I was going for the minimalista !!
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> On Behalf Of Max Richards
> Sent: 17 October 2012 09:15
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: pat snaps **********_______**********Wednesday, 17
> October 2012
>
> do not ask
>
> for whom
>
> the belle
>
> told..
>
> she told
>
> for thee
>
>
> On 17/10/2012, at 6:39 PM, Patrick McManus wrote:
>
>> AAH!
>>
>> his
>> belle
>> told!
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus
>> r187
>>
>> HE LOVED
>>
>> he loved to
>> be the one
>> who flew
>> over her
>> cuckoo's
>> nest
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus
>> r183a
>>
>> JUVENILIA
>>
>>
>> he was
>> still writing
>> juvenilia
>> in his
>> mid seventies
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus
>> r185
>
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