no,
not soaring, Lawrence,
just the sort of economy that Doug so often recommends in his responses to our verse snaps
best from Max
On 04/10/2012, at 9:13 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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> Hi Max
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> and thanks for your comments
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> I am not used to my new mail browser and it and I threw away my
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> I'll try again
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> I did write a lot. This'll be brief
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> I'm not sure what I'll do with it. You're right about the live
> audience. Poetically, it's a slight piece.
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> I'm not sure about the prosaic. It may need attention but I wouldnt
> want soaring lines; or an attempt at them
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> best
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> L
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