yes; love that final couplet especially, Jill….
Doug
On 2012-10-31, at 2:29 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Beautiful, Jill. Arrested moments. Love particularly 'blue the garden' and honest winds.
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> Bill
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> On 31/10/2012, at 10:34 PM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Shadings, awake, above
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>> or part the edge
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>> blue the garden
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>> in the way of an eye
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>> Change masses on
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>> a mark colours
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>> the edge
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>> the wind’s honest
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>> Small things give form
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>> light beaten, water white
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>> each second an old
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>> abundance
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Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Something else is out there
godamnit
And I want to hear it
C.D.Wright
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