Well, I'll just say I like it, Jill, & then a response.
a dance in strict pattern
Doug
On 2012-10-03, at 8:07 AM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> A crystal to sharpen the ball
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> A poem as clear as all
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> A verse to a bell did call
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> A node to soften the fall
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> - Andrew
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> On 3 October 2012 18:23, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> A moon so clear as a bright eye
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>> A moped so clear as a broadcast eyesore
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>> A mortal so clear as a bronze facsimile
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>> A motive so clear as a bright failure
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>> A motor so clear as a brutal falconer
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>> A mound so clear as a budding fandango
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>> A mug so clear as a bright fault
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>> A mule so clear as a brittle fawn
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>> A multitude so clear as a brocade feast
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>> A murderer so clear as a bright feather
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>> A musician so clear as a brittle feeler
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>> A myth so clear as a bronze fender
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> --
> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
> 'Undercover of Lightness'
> http://walleahpress.com.au/recent-publications.html
> 'Shikibu Shuffle'
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com.au/2012/03/new-from-aboveground-press-shikibu.html
>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Something else is out there
godamnit
And I want to hear it
C.D.Wright
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