Clever dinging, donging, Pat, Max.
Bill
On 18/10/2012, at 8:41 PM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Well I am wondering if
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> AAH!
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> his
> belle
> told!
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> Is actually a bit long three words and three lines and a title!
> Perhaps no title and two lines would be sharper??
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> belle
> told!
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> P in editing mode tolling
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Douglas Barbour
> Sent: 17 October 2012 18:04
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: pat snaps **********_______**********Wednesday, 17 October 2012
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> Geez, that's me, too, that juvenile. And love the response, Max.
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> Doug
> On 2012-10-17, at 3:00 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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>> Thanks Max I was going for the minimalista !!
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>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
>> On Behalf Of Max Richards
>> Sent: 17 October 2012 09:15
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: Re: pat snaps **********_______**********Wednesday, 17
>> October 2012
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>> do not ask
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>> for whom
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>> the belle
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>> told..
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>> she told
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>> for thee
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>> On 17/10/2012, at 6:39 PM, Patrick McManus wrote:
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>>> AAH!
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>>> his
>>> belle
>>> told!
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>>> pmcmanus
>>> r187
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>>> HE LOVED
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>>> he loved to
>>> be the one
>>> who flew
>>> over her
>>> cuckoo's
>>> nest
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>>> pmcmanus
>>> r183a
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>>> JUVENILIA
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>>> he was
>>> still writing
>>> juvenilia
>>> in his
>>> mid seventies
>>>
>>>
>>> pmcmanus
>>> r185
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> Douglas Barbour
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> In this world of sin and sorrow, there is always something to be thankful
> for; I am thankful that I am not a Republican.
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> H.L. Mencken
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