thanks
I did, yesterday, feel quite otherworldly after 4 large coffees over a
working day
I'm pleased you picked up on its ingness. That was relatively late on in
composition, through notebooks and an initial type and a couple of
rewrites... suddenly it began to behave itself
well, to a degree
best
L
On Wed, August 29, 2012 17:48, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> Well, drinks or no, I like the way it's all held in the -ing....
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> Doug
> On 2012-08-29, at 6:12 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> No, darling
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>> Actually I have hardly drunk since Jan or Feb, not sure, 2009
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>> three drinks, two of them little more than sips
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>> no spirits
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>> partly trying to save money
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>> but I have also lost interest
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>> L
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>> On Wed, August 29, 2012 12:13, Patrick McManus wrote:
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>>> You been drinking again sweet L?
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>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
>>> On
>>> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
>>> Sent: 29 August 2012 11:23
>>> To: [log in to unmask]
>>> Subject: snap: a face
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>>> from out of shadow and light over concrete between houses a face or
>> something
>>> like
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>>> surrounded by shrubs standing at average height barely inhabiting
>>> continuing now
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>>> smiling
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>>> tarrying forming its selves' expressiveness which wobbles until
>>> dispersing with seeds on wind
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>> -----
>> Lawrence Upton
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>> http://sho-zyg.com/upton.html
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>> Visiting Fellow, Music Dept,
>> Goldsmiths, University of London
>> New Cross, London SE14 6NW
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> Douglas Barbour
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> Latest books:
> Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
> Wednesdays'
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10
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> Why can’t words mean what they say?
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Lawrence Upton
http://sho-zyg.com/upton.html
Visiting Fellow, Music Dept,
Goldsmiths, University of London
New Cross, London SE14 6NW
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