Jill, pardon me, but I wonder how attached you are to _the_ in the seventh
line
if you cut it, the shortness of the line does wonders for _contains_
L
On Wed, August 15, 2012 15:41, Jill Jones wrote:
> Blue light surface
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> covers memory
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> of sound with
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> abundant shadow
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> no box nor drum
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> entirely contains
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> the wandering breath
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> a song-dreamed open
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> breathes difficulty
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> blooms form
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Lawrence Upton
http://sho-zyg.com/upton.html
Visiting Fellow, Music Dept,
Goldsmiths, University of London
New Cross, London SE14 6NW
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