Dave thanks interesting I had not thought of that could be both!!! Or I
could add yet another 'it' '- 'and it blew off'
P what a delight to receive a crit from the top poetic brains! XXXX
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Patrick
'blew off' seems to take 'he' as its subject
On 20 June 2012 09:16, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>wrote:
> HE STUPIDLY
>
> he stupidly
> wrote his snap
> poetryetc snap
> on paper
> on a parapet
> on a bridge
> over a river
> and blew off
> fell -dropped into
> the raging river
> where it floated
> far out of sight
> got waterlogged
> got sodden
> got sunk into
> the waterweeds
> Elodea canadensis
> and got nibbled
> by minnows
> and attacked
> by
> pathogenic microorganisms
> Schistosomatidae,
> Cyclospora cayetanensis
> Campylobacteriosis
> Polyomaviruses
> Leptospirosis
> Salmonellosis
> and finally
> Legionellosis
> which sadly
> completely
> finished it
> off
>
>
> pmcmanus
> r88
>
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