Want it for Hi Spirits ... but find it difficult to come up with a good
title. I think it needs to come from you - the short essence of the poem.
Go to it!
Andrew
On 19 April 2012 22:39, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Andrew - would love for you to blog it! An honor. thinking on titles - any
> ideas?
>
> Chris - totally get your point here.
>
>
> On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 3:13 AM, Chris Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > On 19/04/12 13:49, sharon brogan wrote:
> >
> >> It's Not You
> >>
> >> What you read in these lines
> >> is not you. A kestrel takes
> >> a sparrow from the garden.
> >> Neither of them is you.
> >>
> > Mixed feelings about the second person address here... sorry, can't offer
> > any constructive comment. I do, however, share a difficulty with the
> second
> > person address in writing my own work. Difficult, because, from my POV
> as a
> > writer I feel as if I am accusing the reader of something I am guilty
> of...
> > what do I have to admit wrt to my guilt? That I have survived as a gay
> man
> > and not died of AIDS... survivor guilt?
> >
> > Hope this comment makes sense from my position and my difficulties with
> > second person address?
> >
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> >
>
>
>
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> sharon brogan
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