These are all sharp, cutting pieces, Dominic. I like the split(ting)....
Doug
On 2012-03-20, at 9:01 AM, Dominic Fox wrote:
> Drought being metaphor, scorched to the letter,
> do well with similes; reduce to clear
> in moments, like a microwave through butter.
>
> Take visionary upsight as a near-
> cousin of perception, perhaps ill-
> bred: given to trances, to obscure
>
> utterance, to scarcely convivial
> fits and moods. Show antisocial splitter
> hell-bent on self-enrichment, going fissile.
>
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