my personal thanks, Lawrence, for writing this, as it connects with so much of interest.
I'm about to travel,
miss poetryetc most likely for my five weeks away,
and maybe get home at last to a thousand interesting poetryetc emails…
Auckland, Beverly Hills, Boston and Concord, Manhattan, Cape Coral Florida, Santa Barbara, San Fran, Eugene Oregon here I come…
mostly flying, but amtrak up the west coast…
in Ak expect to see Wystan Curnow erstwhile poetryetc member
Max
On 14/02/2012, at 10:04 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> Hi Max
>
> I have looked at this for some time. I was intrigued by _aerated_...
>
> I agree that couplets here mislead. Sometimes it can be productive to
> visually pattern a poem contrapuntally to the prose meaning, but not, I
> think, here.
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