Wow, I just read the poem & 10 replies (& to replies) appeared. But I liked it too, Lawrence, for the jumps, & their speed.
Doug
On 2012-01-25, at 12:50 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> The jaw drops
> Brain falls
>
> Hope tightens
> A cartoon world closes frameless.
> Weak glimmer in brief memory.
>
> Page end.
> Turn over. Do it again.
>
Douglas Barbour
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