Thanks, Doug
a leit motiv, I think; I'd worry about too much personficiation or to have
it seen constantly
best
L
On Thu, December 15, 2011 16:44, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> with each addition, Lawrence (as here 2 latest) a wider realm of allusion
> emerges. so that 'n this description' becomes the leit motif of the
> series. as with here, some intriguing personification at work…
>
> Doug
> On 2011-12-15, at 6:52 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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>
>> This side it’s a large execution block,
>> terminating The Cove spectacularly. The head goes in at the North, where
>> the sand is, the body, awaiting its separation, at the South over the
>> cluttered rock, legs out in water.
>>
>> There’s even a restraint that would swing down from East,
>> holding the neck still to receive its blow. In this description, the
>> stones left lying about are members of the public, entertained, as small
>> as starlings by the comparison.
>>
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>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
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> Douglas Barbour
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> Something else is out there
> godamnit
>
> And I want to hear it
>
>
> C.D.Wright
>
>
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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