And that work, P. Just not a 'saga', right?
Doug
On 2011-12-14, at 12:17 PM, Patrick McManus wrote:
> Doug thanks -I meant it to be about beating the twilight and extending the
> day
> Ps I have revised it a bit
>
> TWILIGHT
>
> he was
> coming to
> the twilight
> of his long
> and often
> eventful life
> but then
> quick thinking
> he craftily
> switched on
> the full
> extra strong
> floodlighting
> and dallied long
> in extra time
> whilst awaiting
> the referee's
> final whistle
>
>
> pmcmanus
> q962
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Douglas Barbour
> Sent: 14 December 2011 17:07
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: pat snap -(_+_)--(_+_)--(_+_)Wednesday, 14 December 2011-
>
> Nice, Patrick, but the title misleads I suspect.
>
> Doug
> On 2011-12-14, at 4:34 AM, Patrick McManus wrote:
>
>> TWILIGHT
>>
>> he was
>> coming to
>> the twilight
>> of his long
>> and often
>> eventful life
>> but then
>> quick thinking
>> he craftily
>> switched on
>> the full
>> extra strong
>> floodlighting
>> and dallied long
>> in extra time
>> until the ref's
>> final whistle
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus
>> q962
>>
>
> Douglas Barbour
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>
> Something else is out there
> godamnit
>
> And I want to hear it
>
> C.D.Wright
>
Douglas Barbour
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Something else is out there
godamnit
And I want to hear it
C.D.Wright
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