Ditto.
- Jim
On Mon, Dec 5, 2011 at 8:35 AM, Catherine Daly <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I like the longervline breaks, myself.
>
> Catherine
> On Dec 5, 2011 7:26 AM, "Dominic Fox" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Last attempt (and apologies if your mail reader makes them all look
> > the same as each other...)
> >
> > for life together
> > for yvonne, for lila
> > for the end of time
> >
> > convivial as eight-
> > part harmony's irradiant
> > orange and blue-violet
> >
> > dazzling and abandoned
> > as chords of resonance
> > halo the strident
> >
> > moloch-faced brass statue
> > suddenly overwhelmed with flowers
> >
>
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