Yes, terrific, Lawrence. And I like the implied, life copying art aspect....
the motions of the lines as....
Doug
On 2011-11-08, at 6:11 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> A strong quick fluster of crayon lines
> jabbing through into storm waves
>
> blue wash
> over grey,
> and green within both;
> and slow broad unripe depths atop
> drawn stab marks joining rock and rocks
> tenuously despite encroaching sea
> breakers rising moving crabwise
>
> brown smatterings of weed break up
> cream and white and dangerous continuity
> The Gugh may be solid beyond
> the east of Agnes
>
> but it’s not whole
>
> all this a sundering of one
> into two, and three if sea’s a thing
>
>
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> wfuk.org.uk/blog
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