sure it does, Patrick, but youre in grave danger of losing your Raines Park mojo with terms like 'ekphrasistical' (which may not be a term) in your poems....
Doug
On 2011-11-16, at 12:30 AM, Patrick McManus wrote:
> SUDDENLY
>
> suddenly
> on seeing
> himself close
> in the deep
> gilded framed
> long mirror
> he suffered an
> ekphrasistical
> near death
> experience
>
>
> pmcmanus
> q942
> friends does this actually make sense?
> P Puzzled P
>
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