'feathered wings of grey cloud' a lovely line
Not so sure about 'illimitable' (me being a plain word peasant!) perhaps
'constant'
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feathered wings of grey cloud
flutter across the sun
armadas crowd
an illimitable shore
slide below its boundary
& what will be remembered
falls insubstantial
11/11/11
Douglas Barbour
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