Yikes, Lawrence
not my lineation, at all, alas...(how does this happen? I didnt even indent...)
& yes, I'm wondering about those words; sometimes one likes them, but, for sure, some may have to go...
Doug
On 2011-10-27, at 7:15 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> Now, Doug
>
> I do like this
>
> but would you not apply your own principles?
>
> (the) last leaves shiver in (the) wind thin branches & (these) shadows
> stark
> against (a) light blue sky sun already lower above the river valley (its)
> light
> less warm each day
>
> *
>
> the lineation is inherited from the system
>
> best
>
> L
>
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