Strangely enough, Max, I'd add the word "Go." to that final line. I say
'strangely' becoz I'm always advocating cutting back poems, not adding to
'em. To keep in season with Melbourne, it's horses for courses <g>
Andrew
On 26 October 2011 05:56, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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