I like the casual walk aspect here, Andrew. & the wee allusion...
(but maybe that 'it's' & 'that' can go?)
Doug
On 2011-10-19, at 7:14 AM, Andrew Burke wrote:
> paperbark tree leans too far
> toward the green-top pond
>
> blocking the woodchip path
> so we turn three dogs
>
> to the path less walked
> where the morning glory
>
> wends out over dry limbs
> in the bush, tangling
>
> the Jack Russell's legs
> as she squats to shit.
>
> it's the little events
> that make our days
>
> here in anorther late spring
> life mixing the known
>
> with the unexpected
> new and old meshing
>
> to joy our calendar
> to fill our daily narrative
>
> --
>
> Andrew
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