The more of these we see, the more interesting they become as a group (not a series, exactly), :Lawrence. I mean, here's a completely different take, via the verbs, the moment held in memory of it, continuing there....
Together there will be juxtaposition rather than simple connection logically going forward... It will be a landscape collage of a book if it gets there...
Doug
On 2011-09-29, at 2:44 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> Now, dissolved in each other, blue and green
> suspended in the sky without compounding,
> glowing, embedded with last night’s old paint
> unable to be separate, carried.
>
> Earths multiply and take hold, brightening increasing.
> Still all’s more a palette than a picture.
> No sea except those spaces without lights,
> the land much slight darkening in one’s memory
>
> with expectation of the sun’s rising;
> of which we shall make sense without much thought;
> and be visible, clear and coherent.
> It shall soon fall into good stability.
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> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
> wfuk.org.uk/blog
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> Lawrence Upton
> Dept of Music
> Goldsmiths, University of London
>
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