ah, well, what was the format Andrew? indented, or just single lineation?
i like the ay it traverses the seen & the heard (or remembered as heard)…
Doug
On 2011-09-22, at 10:25 PM, andrew burke wrote:
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> *
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> man in the shopping centre car park
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> stands trustingly
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> behind my car
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> and folds a sheet
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> of paper into eighths
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> in a cross wind
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> that blows Monk’s
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> sharp-angled chords
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> clear across the bitumen to
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> exotic palms which sway
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> as I write
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> as he folds now into sixteenths
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> as time tocks by on a seagull’s wing
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>
> --
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> Its format won't stand up to the transport, but what the hell.
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> Andrew
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