& then here the word is thing Jill, ambiguously working its magic....
I almost wanted there to be no obvious verb, but breathes will do....
Doug
On 2011-09-06, at 11:15 PM, Jill Jones wrote:
> radon dragonfly springs
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> spirit wind crow finch
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> yellow bubble algae
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> fallen tree thighbone
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> paddymelon bush tomato white
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> gum square jasper
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> rock whistling afternoon radioactive
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> ridges many songs
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> caw caw breathe in
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> grass of ancient
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> Paralana Hot Springs (august snap)
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> Jill Jones
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> On 07/09/2011, at 2:31 PM, andrew burke wrote:
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>> after the pure journey began
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>> and had to be hosed down and jacketed
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>> in the three ring circle of the mind
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>> whips cracking thighs pleading
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>> lip syncing to *‘the thing *
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>> *whether subjective or objective’*
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>> the character of it all
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>> as built by
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>> the characters in it all
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>> Andrew
>> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
>> http://www.mullamullapress.com/QWERTY
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