One interesting aspet of this ongoing series, Lawrence, is my sense that a lot of these, linked, would make a kind of serial poem, or long poem, in which sections of different lengths accumulate into a broader sense of the landscape(s) as a whole.
This would be one of the tiny inserts between larger ones, perhaps....
How to organize them all, well, yeah: there's a lot of work to do, . . . but...
Doug
On 2011-09-08, at 3:56 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> bus window -- car lights –
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> reflected yellow -- on grass –
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> looks like – buttercups --
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