I like it, not least the spacing & thus the sound&silences...
Doug
On 2011-08-18, at 5:11 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> red mesh fence
> big hole
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> granite falls into itself
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> sea under
> sings Boom!
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> Lawrence Upton
> Dept of Music
> Goldsmiths, University of London
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