Patrick had it,
but it got lost
in transition....
my life story P
have good weekend all you
poor poets be glad
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Douglas Barbour
Sent: 19 August 2011 18:18
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Subject: Re: in a landscape
Oh these machines!
I got the 3 line version just like yours, Lawrence
Patrick had it, but it got lost in transition....
Doug
On 2011-08-19, at 11:15 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> that's how
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> I propose to
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> leave it
>
>
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> would be better
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> L
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> On Fri, August 19, 2011 18:03, Patrick McManus wrote:
>> that's how I propose
>> to leave it
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