That's how I sent it!
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
Sent: 19 August 2011 18:15
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Subject: Re: in a landscape
that's how
I propose to
leave it
would be better
L
On Fri, August 19, 2011 18:03, Patrick McManus wrote:
> that's how I propose
> to leave it
>
> P
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> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 19 August 2011 16:51
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> Subject: Re: in a landscape
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> that's how I propose to leave it
>
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> L
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> On Fri, August 19, 2011 16:10, andrew burke wrote:
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>> I like it as a single. A
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>> On 19 August 2011 23:02, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>
>>> Hi Doug
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> and thank you once again
>>>
>>> I think I may just throw the whole bushel out with you liking this
>>> stuff - i'll keep posting
>>>
>>> not much to say on this but
>>>
>>> the last line is set as one (showing my age! who talks of setting a
>>> line now) but, yes, it almost makes it to three... 2 and a half
>>>
>>>
>>> On Fri, August 19, 2011 15:42, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>>> Nice, Lawrence. This is how I ot it; is the last line supposed to
>>>> be three?
>>>>
>>>> Like the allusion to Spicer there... that fits nevertheless into
>>>> that space named so...
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Doug
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 2011-08-19, at 4:08 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> buried in air voice calloused hope out of range
>>>>>
>>>>> confined alert stone depth deadening beneath our feet
>>>>>
>>>>> bad acoustic and abandoned manned machine
>>>>>
>>>>> to be is to work brain's the engine housing echoes
>>>>>
>>>>> the skull is deaf connects the neck bone. execute.
>>>>>
>>>>> information loops the highway with emptiness
>>>>>
>>>>> a noose choking the nous with clattering readback
>>>>>
>>>>> buried in air, just the head knows aether
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Douglas Barbour
>>>> [log in to unmask]
>>>>
>>>> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
>>>> http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Latest books:
>>>> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
>>>> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
>>>> Wednesdays'
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-pre
>>> ss _10
>>>
>>>
>>>> .html
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> It is natural to speak of your own weaknesses so winsomely they
>>>> will seem strengths, as if everyone else is inadequate if they do
>>>> not have your inadequacies.
>>>>
>>>> William H. Gass
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> -----
>>> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
>>> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
>>> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
>>> wfuk.org.uk/blog ---- Lawrence Upton
>>> Dept of Music
>>> Goldsmiths, University of London
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Andrew
>> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
>> 'Mother Waits for Father Late' republished available at
>> http://www.picaropress.com/
>> http://www.qlrs.com/poem.asp?id=766
>> http://frankshome.org/AndrewBurke.html
>>
>>
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> -----
> UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
> 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
> Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
> wfuk.org.uk/blog ----
> Lawrence Upton
> Dept of Music
> Goldsmiths, University of London
>
>
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UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton
42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover
Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4
wfuk.org.uk/blog
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Lawrence Upton
Dept of Music
Goldsmiths, University of London
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