Yeah, I see that length thing (& wish I'd paid attention to my own typos)...
It was just wondering about that.
I note that this one moves all the way through what sounds there....
From what you say, these are part of a kind of collection youve been making for some years now...?
Sheesh! What happens to lineation when we reply?
Doug
On 2011-08-19, at 9:02 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> Hi Doug
>
> and thank you once again
>
> I think I may just throw the whole bushel out with you liking this stuff -
> i'll keep posting
>
> not much to say on this but
>
> the last line is set as one (showing my age! who talks of setting a line
> now) but, yes, it almost makes it to three... 2 and a half
>
>
> On Fri, August 19, 2011 15:42, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>> Nice, Lawrence. This is how I ot it; is the last line supposed to be
>> three?
>>
>> Like the allusion to Spicer there... that fits nevertheless into that
>> space named so...
>>
>>
>> Doug
>>
>>
>> On 2011-08-19, at 4:08 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
>>
>>
>>> buried in air voice calloused hope out of range
>>>
>>> confined alert stone depth deadening beneath our feet
>>>
>>> bad acoustic and abandoned manned machine
>>>
>>> to be is to work brain's the engine housing echoes
>>>
>>> the skull is deaf connects the neck bone. execute.
>>>
>>> information loops the highway with emptiness
>>>
>>> a noose choking the nous with clattering readback
>>>
>>> buried in air, just the head knows aether
>>>
>>
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Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
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Wednesdays'
http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
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