What I like, as here, or if you tried again with just Colbert's phrases, Barry, is the way the juxtapositions from line to line both jar & connect.
What is clear is how long youve been working on this method, & how well you can 'work' it, through.
Doug
On 2011-08-17, at 3:33 PM, Barry Alpert wrote:
> SLEEP, MY LOVE
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> [via] D[ouglas] SIRK
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