Thanks, Doug. Actually a diastic, a form invented by Jackson MacLow, which I often try to weld to the sonnet. Very difficult to keep in mind the positions of the letters within words during a live talk or during a film, but here I had my source interview on the computer screen as I chose language units.
Barry
On Wed, 20 Jul 2011 12:19:47 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>Neatly done, & sneaky indented acrostic, Barry.
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>Doug
>On 2011-07-20, at 12:08 PM, Barry Alpert wrote:
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>> NAM JUNE PAIK DAY
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