Agreed, Max: it's short & sweet Sharon.
maybe just drop the 'is' ?
Doug
On 2011-06-08, at 10:31 PM, Max Richards wrote:
> A little classic, in its way, Sharon.
> And yet, returning to it, I find myself wondering about the phrase
>
> trying to live
>
> which maybe can be improved on, not at all sure how, or expanded a teeny
> bit. But of course it's vital not to burden the curve, the rhythm, the play
> with reaching and reach...
>
> Max
>
>
> On 9/06/11 10:02 AM, "sharon brogan" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> it's spring here
>> everything is trying to live
>>
>> reaching up for light
>> reaching down for water
>>
>> you reach for something else
>> it's almost in your grasp
>>
>>
>>
>
> --
>
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