&, on Andrew's note, also drop the 'it's'
simple little shifts, but just the bit more speed that might work...
Doug
On 2011-06-09, at 8:40 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> Agreed, Max: it's short & sweet Sharon.
>
> maybe just drop the 'is' ?
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