Jill - I read it sleepily this morning and couldn't grasp it, so came back
tonight and am none the wiser. But I don't ask for an explanation: a poem is
a poem is a poem. I shall approach it again in the shiny new light of dawn
and simply enjoy it for itself.
Andrew
On 26 May 2011 22:35, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Jill,
>
> After a number of readings in which I was mainly preoccupied with
> syntactical relationships (partly because of the lack of punctuation), I'm
> still intrigued. Interesting to consider as well in light of this wikipedia
> description:
>
> The text for a da capo aria was typically a poem or other verse sequence
> written in two strophes, the first for the A section (hence repeated later)
> and the second for B. Each strophe consisted of from three to six lines, and
> terminated in a line containing a masculine ending.
>
> Barry
>
> On Thu, 26 May 2011 02:53:57 +0000, [log in to unmask] <
> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> >Aria da capo
> >
> >fixtures and rain
> >fell to scatter
> >dark mark paver
> >
> >fall drug cold
> >but aria comes
> >I am capable
> >
> >nothing halts tempo
> >today cornered fell
> >but arcs win
> >
> >________________________
> >Jill Jones
> >
> >www.jilljones.com.au
>
--
Andrew
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