I just realized that I'm confused -- which version do you prefer? And -- is
this poem good enough to post on my blog?
I'm out of practice...
--
sharon brogan
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406.578.1788
On Thu, May 19, 2011 at 12:19 AM, andrew burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Yes, let it be - seconded. Andrew
>
> On 19 May 2011 04:12, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > yes, let it be...
> >
> > Doug
> > On 2011-05-18, at 12:57 PM, sharon brogan wrote:
> >
> > > red and yellow tulips
> > > bloom in the garden
> > > down-facing hellebore
> > > lilac buds
> > >
> > > so much spring
> > >
> > > you have wanted to die
> > > for so long
> > >
> > > your daughters suffer
> > > i do not suffer
> > > i wait
> > >
> > > a tulip drops
> > > red petals
> > > on the dark ground
> > >
> > > On Wed, May 18, 2011 at 12:22 PM, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> > >
> > >> 2011 May 18
> > >>
> > >> red and yellow tulips
> > >> bloom in the garden
> > >> down-facing hellebore
> > >> lilac buds
> > >>
> > >> so much spring
> > >>
> > >> you have wanted to die
> > >> for so long
> > >> now that it’s upon you
> > >> you resist, you forget
> > >>
> > >> your daughters suffer
> > >> i do not suffer
> > >> i wait
> > >>
> > >> a tulip drops
> > >> red petals
> > >> on the dark ground
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> --
> > >> sharon brogan
> > >> http://www.sbpoet.com
> > >> http://www.sbpoet.net
> > >> http://smallpoems.sbpoet.net
> > >> 406.578.1788
> > >>
> > >>
> > >
> > >
> > > --
> > > sharon brogan
> > > http://www.sbpoet.com
> > > http://www.sbpoet.net
> > > http://smallpoems.sbpoet.net
> > > 406.578.1788
> > >
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
> >
> > http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
> > http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> >
> > Latest books:
> > Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy)
> > http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664
> > Wednesdays'
> >
> >
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html
> >
> > the poem, like the city, destroyed and built again
> > and, here and there, remains of history
> >
> > Chus Pato (trans. Erin Mouré)
> >
>
>
>
> --
> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
> 'Mother Waits for Father Late' republished available at
> http://www.picaropress.com/
> http://www.qlrs.com/poem.asp?id=766
> http://frankshome.org/AndrewBurke.html
>
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