Dear Sheila,
Tim Gays is literally the son of an escaped Nazi.
That's true. We have a lot of them in Mt Barker, South Australia.
On 19/05/2011, at 5:04 AM, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> Great response, Stephen, I appreciate this, and will take a closer
> look!
> Cheers, Sheila
>
> On Wed, May 18, 2011 at 12:26 PM, Stephen Vincent <[log in to unmask]
> >wrote:
>
>> For whatever quick reason, Sheila, #1/, feels strained to me.
>> The rest I really like - subtle, close & felt with depth.
>>
>> Stephen V
>>
>> --- On Wed, 5/18/11, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> From: Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
>> Subject: Four Observations
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Date: Wednesday, May 18, 2011, 11:31 AM
>>
>> 1/
>> stripes of morning
>> sliver across wood floor
>> dream lore makes
>> a fresh idea
>> warm strands of thought
>> turn things
>> into the substance
>> daylight
>>
>> 2/
>> snapdragons litter
>> the walk
>> I think the thumb
>> green with diversion
>> an aversion
>> to the dust
>>
>> 3/
>> Pomona dampness
>> loses trill
>> informal frisking equals
>> safety
>> just in time
>> a path to you and your departed
>> fractions in the light
>>
>> 4/
>> her on-screen autumn
>> view is mine
>> so few of us
>> limber enough
>> to resist the touch
>> of balustrade
>>
>> Sheila E. Murphy
>>
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